OHMYGOSH
MIND FUCK
OMFG
I CAN'T GET OVER THIS
I CAN'T
OMFG
XD
MIND FUCK
Great writing skills, overall. You can make an adjustment in grammar, but that's about it. Your idea with this Was AMAZING AND I LOVED IT.
Author's response
thanks..
that was actually my first fic so..
and it was based on my expirience,the bullying..