Wow... This was amazing! Like Vivalalife said, it was easy to relate to.
I like all your short one shots and poems. They're nice little reads that make you think for a minute, about other things. No big news stories, no personal life crisis's, just small things that can be changed, but are chosen not to be seen... They're original.
Author's response
That's such a big compliment, thank you very much. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a thoughtful review :)