Wow, this is really good. I love all the hidden meanings and everything in this. The only thing I would say is that you say 'Even if this was the first place they thought of, they wouldn't check here first.' Why not? I don't understand.
However, this is a great, very meaningful story.
Author's response
I'm sorry I wasn't very clear about that. What I meant was that even though one of Harry's guard might think of Godric's Hollow, they wouldn't think Harry would actually think of going there. See, Harry hasn't heard much at all about Godric's Hollow (just like we readers haven't), so why would he think of going there? That doesn't make much sense typed out (stupid brain can't explain things). Sorry. I suppose it would have been easier just to leave that line out. HEEHEE. Thank you for your wonderful review.