First: The whole Jaws thing had me laughing out loud! I know a lot of people that still won't go into the ocean to this day.
Second: How do you keep track of all you asterisks? Not sure why, but that is the first time that I had wondered that.
Third: What!? Who is Patrick going on a date with!? Grrrr. (That an angry growl, not an 'I'm trying to look sexy' one.)
Fourth: I'm sure I don't need to keep saying this, but Wonderful chapter as always.
Author's response
First: Glad it had some entertainment value to it. And I´ve met a lot of people on the train today who might be using that excuse as to why they smelled so bad. Yuck. Second: I recount the asterisks like two times before I post. I would really prefer numbers. I was thinking about going like (1), (2), etc... but that is too much intrusion into the real text of the story for my taste. So I pretty much just recount. Using my fingers, of course. Third: I really wouldn´t know. Hat Rack is pretty secretive with things like that. I´m guessing... nah, she turned out to be a lesbian. ;) Fourth: :) I don´t mind reading it again. ;) And the same back at ya for your last chapter. And for this review. /Division of Joy/hi5