LAURA I WILL FITE U BITCH
YEAH
I WORK OUT
BITCH
But I am sure that karma will get her eventually. I will wait eagerly for that. -lowers fists-
You know what? In most chapters of most of your stories, you switch POVs, but here it was all Brendon. I kinda like it, we only get one perspective. And even then, we already know what Taylor's thinking... Lots of good dramatic irony. (OMG OMG OMG ENGLISH CLASS DID TEACH ME SOMETHING, WHO WOULDA THUNK IT)
Awkwardly adorable conversation is awkwardly adorable. I loved that. And aww. Poor Brendon. Come here baby -gives Brendon a hug-
Ryan Ross makes every story 1000000000x better, but he better stay away from Taylor or I will CUT HIS BALLS OFF THE CHEATING LYING SCUMBAG
-cries from Ryan Ross feels-
I need to finish this review before I become a sniveling wet mess... Um. I loved this chapter, please update again soon! :)
Author's response
:P
I do switch around a lot. I hate staying at one POV. it feels way too limited, but at the same time I like to keep some chapters just one way. I enjoyed writing from Brendon's perspective but I wasn't really ready for it. Yeah, since her thoughts were kind of obvious I was going to leave it unwritten.
Haha, yay for English class!
He seriously does.
And whoa, anger?
Thank you!