I quite like your story and its keeping from the usual clichés. I think you keep Susan well from becoming a cheap imitation of Ginny/Hermoine, but on the other hand your Ginny characterisation in the last chapter seemed a bit … flat.
Aside form that you did well and I’m keen on reading the next chapter soon :).
Author\'s Response: Thank you for the reveiw. I am interested to see what you thought of the Ginny in chapter 8. I will post chapters 10 and 11 soon. I have just started writing chapter 12.Jim