good stuff... i guess its a bit fast in some places. but nevertheless a good read. i just hope you make Harry take some time to learn all he has too. i think Tonks can help with that.... anyway, update soon.
Author's response
That is the purpose for this fic. He will take the time for everything, otherwise he is an elemental, but has no idea how to use it.
The time for learning will come, when the things about his harem will get sorted out, and that will take many chapters.
Then we have manu chapters about his learning his elemental abilities, and there are many other chapters to come.
This story will be very long, maybe 300,000 words or more.
Thanks for the review.
By the way, what exactly to you mean with 'a bit fast'?