Hey interesting story and your right it does have it twists and turns. At the beginning you definitely thru me a curve ball when you let it be know he was dreaming!
Author's response
When I wrote that first chapter, I was in such a bad mood, because I started a story, but my cowriter insisted that she would continue. That, after I wrote already more then a half of it.
Then I started with that scene on purpose.
I want to write it slow and easy, buolding the whole thing up for the big splatch.
Wim