i can't help but admire how well written these chapters are!
one thing though...frank mentioned his name to gerard once. and then gerard asked him what his name was the next time.
i dont know. maybe it's just me. :)
Author's response
Oh! Thanks for pointing that out! Yeah, I do that sometimes. I forget what the reader knows or doesn't know and I accidentally put something in there that shouldn't be. Thank you so much!