(#) olafr 2006-11-16
I've never really been a fan of stories about Harry's parents, but this one looks like it's got an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes - I usually enjoy your stuff, and this one looks to be at least as good as your others.
Technically speaking, this chapter represents a classic 'hook' - anticipation and interest have been built, and I'm well and truly caught. Well done.