(#) DnG 2013-02-02
Very intriguing, very engaging. A few minor spelling errors here and there, but nothing overly upsetting.
Will there be any love interest for Harry in this new world? I'm hoping that there is, it would help stabilize his new combined self. He would become more tollerant of those around, and it might ground his wavering personality. It most definitely would help chase the dark thoughts away and give the older, dominant personality a reason to value life once more.