No, Jon, you didn't do anything! :(
This is just so.... Gajeoajxghwkaisgwvwkdovjfb. Yeah. Spreads hands sheepishly I don't even have words. Especially for the whipping part, that was just... Just /ugh/. Jeez woman, way to pack an emotion-filled punch to the gut.
Benjamin just needs to go the fuck away and Jon needs to save the day. Nods emphatically Yes. (Just like I need to get over my writer's block and write that MTYK chapter... :/ And then spend some time on Phantoms... :( ) JON GO SAVE CHRISTIAN OR I WILL JUMP INTO THE STORY AND DO IT MY-BLOODY-SELF. Ahem. Yes, well, now that I've regained some of my composure, I'd just like to say that this was a brilliant update, and I loved it. :3