Well, let me just say that you gave birth to a wonderful baby elephant! That means that I really liked this chapter.
This chapter was very well written, and even though you said that you were having problems with the ending, I loved that you left us all on a cliffhanger with an Angry Pete "I'm the Fucking Artist!" HA HA HA!
Another thing that I enjoyed was the relationship advancement between Elise and Belle. It was excellent how Belle had to ask for help and how Elise came to the "rescue."
OH! One more thing. Christian back = complete drama-rama! I love it.
Let me shout out back at cha! You da bomb. Fall Out Boyz 4ever!
Author's response
angry pete= :] especially after watching that video. did you see andys shorts? joes bling? i pretty much want to never see them like that again. actually, i’ll probably watch it again when i get home. gah.
Elise (despite herself) has a heart of gold. That comes later in the story, though. is anyone else noticing that every one comes to Belle’s rescue?
Christian back = complete drama-rama i guess that’s settled. can you say “perfect catch phrase”?