Review for Anyone Up For a Re-Write?

Anyone Up For a Re-Write?

(#) LaurentheHuman 2013-02-16

Name: Mikey Way
Nickname(s): Mikes, occasionally.

Looks;
Hair: Light brown, longish, usually covered by a grey or black beanie.
Eyes: Hazel.
General weight/height/skin tone: 5'10, 140ish, olive.

What you usually wear(it's after vampires have taken over the world, so nothing fancy and perfect): Grey and red striped shirt under a black zip-up hoodie. Dark grey jeans ripped at the knees. Worn down, all black converses. Wears black and white rimmed rectangular glasses.

Personality: Sweet and quiet. Shy, but when pulled out of his shell, can be very funny. A bit of a nerd, but completely lovable.

Part: The survivor.

Strengths: He may not look it, but that boy can kick your ass. He can also cook. (what the fuck, Lauren. Eh, I dunno what to put here.)

Anything Else: I'M A LITTLE SORRY, BUT IF YOU PUT A GUY OPTION FOR PETE'S LOVE INTREST, I WILL DO THIS. BEWARE. :D