Review for Anyone Up For a Re-Write?

Anyone Up For a Re-Write?

(#) HatedEyes 2013-02-18

Mm yes I'm your chikka.
(Here that means sandwich so I'm yo sandwich.)

DON'T WORRY,
I'VE BEEN ROCKING OUT TO SONGS ABOUT POLYSTYRENE HATS SINCE I WAS A GOOBER

(I need my pain meds ASAP)