I really can't win with Christian!
I mean I love all your characters but I would've told Jon everything from the start and I would've told them about the whole Anna thing. Anna is a bitch! I'm sorry xD
I like her and I get that she has good intentions but she comes off as arogant and needy, selfish almost. Like Benjamin wasn't abusive enough to Chris and she has to get all up in there too! Bitch makes me mad.
I really like how Jon and Brendon are always there for her,but I have a feeling that when she tells them that secret they're maybe gonna turn their backs on her.
It just seems to me like Chris has a weird,submisive almost addictive personality, always got the same thing going on, that pattern,which in a personal sense is bad cause all she ever seems to do is get in trouble but in a writing sense its very good cause it's refreshing to get a character like her on here!
I like the mic in personalities you got going with the characters.It makes the story really exciting to read cause idk what the fuck's gonna happen next.
Anyway, this is just me voicing my thoughts because a rarelly do so.
I love this story!
I hope you update soon ! :D