Review for Demons Within Me

Demons Within Me

(#) kitkat1327 2006-11-17

Umm… for some reason I already posted this but its not coming up, hopefully it works this time

Okay, I think I've calmed down enough to get actual words out of my mouth beside "gowahdkahosaofhdoha" since I'm so shocked/excited/giddy/depressed.
so anyways there is not word to describe how absolutely great this story is so instead I'll make one up. This story is absolutely megagiganticlysuperduperawesomelycrazilyexcitinglyadventurouslytradgiclyactionilygreatandawesomeandthebestfanfictioneverinventedbecauseitsjusttoawesometoexpressandeventhisrandombigworddoesnotdescribeitsgreatnessenoughsoI'llbequitenowandshutup!.
Thats how- … okay this doesn’t sound happy enough soo....
THATS HOW GREAT THIS IS!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION... NO, THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!
OKAY TIME TO TAKE MY COMPUTER OFF CAPS...
so anyways I thought I had calmed down but I guess I haven’t. Wow I didn’t think this chapter was going to be out for awhile, this is sooner than I expected
... no that still doesn’t sound as excited as I am... I think I'll sub in exclamation marks for periods...
… er I mean '!!!'
My brother hasn’t even seen the last chapter yet!
!!! Well that’s probably because we're to lazy for our own good.
(Flashback)
Me: hey matt want to see demons
Matt: no a good shows on right now
(Half hour later)
Matt: hey, I'll read it now
Me: ... I'm to lazy to go get it...
(End of flash back)
So anyways it kept going on like that all week so he never got to read it!
So anyways in regards to why I'm shocked/excited/giddy/depressed
Shocked: I was super shocked to see this updated
Excited; I'm excited because I was going to read it
Giddy: I read it and its great! Every 5 seconds I giggle because it was so AWESOME!!!!!! (Seriously, I have been giggling and jumping around excitedly)
Depressed: It's the last chapter of DWM forever! Of course I'm depressed!

I'm seriously going to fall into a state of depression tonight or tomorrow! It happens with all my addictions to books/fan fictions. When I finish a large series of books I’ll just be depressed for the rest of the day because I know there won’t be anymore of the adventure. The only fan fiction I ever got depressed about is this one called 'Skin Deep' and that was probably the worst depression I ever had! It lasted a day and that whole day I did nothing but lie on the couch and think. Eventually my brother cheered me out of it by saying fan fiction was my drug and I should stop reading it and I responded "I can quit whenever I want, I just don’t want to!" ha, fun times!!!!
wow I'm kind of off topic here!
So anyways I wasn’t nearly as addicted to 'skin deep' as demons within me so I'm probably going to go in a VERY, VERY large depression today.

hmm!! so I'm guessing the whole 'Archie can talk to Tulais in his head and his eyes turned red' thing is what Chiron did, good old Chiron, not really making Tulais be gone forever! I trust him now, Chiron is officially off my 'people to kill' list, I guess I can take Jay off to, he's not that much of a jerk. Ha, I love Archie’s little ‘made up’ conversations with Tulais, it reminds me of myself! Yes, actually I do make conversations with myself inside my head (I’m weird ;) ) I’ll be all,
“Ughh, That test is tomorrow and I haven’t studied, I have to study NOW”
“Oh come on, you know it well enough, why don’t you go on the computer instead”
“Shut up! I have to study”
“Come on! Just for a little bit, besides, the idiot teacher lets you come back after school to finish it. The test is in 3rd, so do all you can then memorize the questions you don’t know and study in 4th and 5th.”
“Shut up that’s cheating”
“You know you want to”
Yes I actually do that, I know, I know, I’m weird. Actually that real scenario happened last Thursday… my stupid evil cheating side won the argument…
... Hmm I'm trying to think of something else to say here...
Umm... I know there’s something else...
Oh yeah, this is the happiest day of my life! first off all I had no school today and second this amazing chapter is updated... no wait, this is the WORST day of my life, I mean, that chapter was amazing! but it means there’s no more left! Sure There's the sequel but that wont be for awhile now...
I actually hoped this chapter would take you awhile longer because I was working on one last 'DWM' drawing and was almost finished but oh well, I'll review to tell you when it's done...
Wow, I think this is the longest review I ever typed! It's taken me, like, 45 minutes!
Well anyway I'll see if I can get my brother to review this, hopefully he'll get off his but and actually do it...
A/A forever

... Wow, I usually just put 'UPDATE!!!' at the bottom but I can’t now... I feel so empty....

... Oh shoot my depressions starting to kick in since I finally realized it’s over...
sighs… (Wow I seriously actually sighed when I typed that)
at least since I'm reviewing my family wont get warts...
For the sake of old times...
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