Review for Got another story idea.

Got another story idea.

(#) missfunghoul57 2013-02-26

Younger Sister (Our protangist)

NAME: Eva Cassidy West

AGE: 17-18

HAIR STYLE: Wavy, falls to the center of her chest, usually wears it up in a pony tail or bun when she doesn't have time to make it look presentable

HAIR COLOR: Dark brown, with some lighter hilights

EYE COLOR: deep brown as well

LIPS (Thin, Plump, etc.):...not too thin, not too plump, but shaped almost like those of a baby doll, very natural and curvy?

LIP COLOR (Lipstick or Natural): Usually wears green apple chapstick, but isn't afraid of a little color every once in a while

CLOTHING STYLE: although she loves her jeans, and shorts, she can also be found in skirts and dresses. A "leather and lace" or "classy-edgy" look to her. Ripped jeans and old converse, lace mini-skirt with high leather boots. Nothing too flashy tho...

PERSONALITY IN GENERAL: Can come across as shy at first, but her wit, humor, and free spirit is evident after she opens up. Unlike her sister, she is creative, and beyond artistic, surrounding herself with french literature, classic rock records, Beethoven, oil paints, and a worn out guitar. Even though she is EXTREMELY independent, she is loyal to her friends, and puts everyone before herself, including her sometimes bitchy sister. Rather intelligent, but not too nerdy ;) Stands up for her friends and beliefs, and only lets her guard down to those who have earned her trust.

OTHER: I think I covered everything! Sorry if this is too long! Let me know if you need anything else!

TIMELINE: I'm not crazy good at creating timelines, but if you like any of my ideas, feel free to use them. Older sister and boyfriend start dating; Eva constantly listens to her sister go on and on about this boy; Eva and her family have never met him & really have no clue who he is; one night, Eva being the music freak she is, goes to an open mic night to play some of her music, and unknowingly meets sisters boyfriend; Eva starts to think this mystery guy might be into her, a little on and off flirting; ONE WEEK LATER; Eva and family @ town's carnival or something; formally introduced to boyfriend by older sister; Eva is stunned, can't believe he didn't tell her he was dating her sister, confused, upset; Boyfriend finds her, the two have a little moment.....

Something like that? I'm sorry if it totally sucks. I warned you I'm not very good at this stuff.

WHERE THEY MEET: bookstore, concert, carnival, school function, family dinner?

Thanks for reading this mini book I just wrote! Happy Writing!