This is an excellent beginning that I can't wait to see continued. Please don't hesitate in writting more, nor take to long to do so. But at the same time please don't write too quickly, which is a problem many authours go through.
-Wizardking
Author's response
Thank you. I've got a good outline going and have already started on the next chapter. I'm going for about a chapter (of 7-12,000 words or so) every 1-2 weeks