Just wanted to let you know I really liked this. In the whole Hojo/Jenova/Sephiroth business, Lucretia frequently gets consigned to little more than a brood mare. People forget she was a scientist, and that she surely must've been aware something was happening to her body.
It's hard to believe anyone could be that naive, to think they were going to give birth to the Savior of the Planet, but she strikes me as being rather young and impressionable, and far too trusting of Hojo for her own good.