Poor Mikey... And Pete.
I really like this story.
Are you still writing it?
Author's response
I got quite a bit further but haven't posted those chapters on this site. If you'd like, I'll do that now. I haven't updated it beyond those chapters that haven't been posted yet but I haven't given up on it. For more immediate updates, I go by the same username on deviantart.com and have written a lot more than just this one. Thank you for taking the time to review!