FicWad

First of all, you´ve taken the one shot to a new level, Plankty (plonk + Katy).

A) „son of a bitch“ -> Ha ha. Kinda like the literal “Shit or get off the pot” thing that I had Joe say.
B) “SHITzu” AND sob: Katy, what was that with the fine line of swearing that you walk so well? ;)
C) First I thought Harry was a guy and I was like “YAY! More gay porn!” ;) But I guess not. Tampons… good choice.
D) The ambiance, woman! There´s tons of little details (eg. the explosion of the tangerine taste) which I think are even more important in one-shots than longer stories.
E) the little banter ( about “shortness”) = extremely cute and awkward, thus even cuter :)
F) I didn´t expect the kiss at all. Then again it´s a one-shot, so the characters have to hurry. ;)
G) “stumped”: I´ve been wanting to use this so desperatly in the Files. (That´s what happens when you read dictionaries like I do.) I´ve been thinking about a situation that could have Sheena say that but I haven´t come up with one yet. But I´m probably still gonna use it should my mind excrete something useful. I love to see that we come from the same Stump up the Volume-teasing planet. ;)
H) “no can do” makes me :)))) (even though the guy saying it was definitely not a plonker)
I) Needless to say that the robbery scene is PURELY ORIGINAL. (You´re making it difficult for me to decide what adjective I want to choose when giving you a rating point. :P) I´m loving it!
J) The ending is bizarre and a shock. Amazing, powerful, makes ya think. (Even me.)

I would be willing to share Hatrick with you, Katy. ;) Love you!