Yes.
I love this.
You're so good at writing and I love that you can transfer emotions from characters to readers.
I really hope you continue this because its really good and I can't wait to find out what happens.
How old are Gerard and Mikey?
Author's response
oh wow thank you so much. did you know your comment made me do the retarded bird thingy! (where you flap your arms and smile so hard you cant keep your eyes open.) yeah I'm an odd person. Anyway! thank you for the review. I'm so happy that my writing transferred emotion. I'm so gonna continue this! and about their age...well they're in their teens and going to high school. im still actually thinking that one over. at the moment i'm thinking Gerard is going to be no older than 16, maybe 17 and Mikey is 13, 14. I'll let you know in the next chapter X)
(if you want you can suggest an age, if you see this before the next update )
thank you again for the comment, it means a lot to me.