I´m... stumped. (Ha, Katy. ;) )
This is one of the best things I´ve ever read in my entire life. I love (duh) how Pete is a bit assholey and reluctant to help at first.
It´s totally plonk (Katy can fill you in on that) how the narrator´s humor become more and more apparant as the story commences.
I can´t wait to read the update. :)
You´re gifted.