That sucks that it got rated down. :/ You should still be really proud of this though. I may not listen to SWS (Even though I want to start) but this was written quite well. c: I liked it.
xx Kitty
Author's response
Aw, thank you, lovely. :)
I highly recommend listening to them. They're a great band.
This really does mean a lot, thank you very much. :)