i was about to submit this review and my computer died. i had a huge in depth "oh emm gee" type of review. let's see what i can do about recreating it.
let me first start out by saying i am thoroughly impressed by your ability to pull so many different aspects of life into this one story.
it is so well written that i find myself being able to understand exactly how the character feels, and how she thinks about things.
i was floored by the meg describing patrick as gray, and her reasoning behind it. the whole first paragraph was so well written that i could hardly breathe.
lines i loved in this chapter:
"Not someone struggling for the light, but a shadow content with being just that. A shadow. Not copying. Not mimicking."
"Is being treated for bipolarism...unsuccessfully."
"The alphabet, dude. I know the mother fucking alphabet."
i am giving Katy a huge hug for suggesting this one.
but i'll give you a bigger one for writing it.