Finally, a decent story! Very interesting so far, will definitely invest some time in reading the next few chapters.
I like that its a re-write of an old fic, too. Thats exactly what I'm doing at the moment, writing an old fic that I wrote like 7 years ago and its just so cringe haha, but I like the plot. Haven't posted anything yet though..
Anyway, good story so far :)
Author's response
thank you!! haha yeah the first version of this story was horribly written but it really did like the plot so I'm glad I decided to rewrite it! :D