Hahaha, I laughed so much :L the throwing ingredients at eachother I can relate too very well, me and my best friend destroy the whole kitchen every time :D
It was really original and cute and funny and... gah, I just loved it, okay? Why must you be so good at writing? D: it's not fair (sobs). But it was honestly one of the best things I've read in a long time, a long, looooooooooong time. It made me smile so much my mum thought I was deranged (:
Just a quick note because it was aaaaaages ago that I e-mailed you about this :S but I have some illustrations for 'Be my Detonator' and I was wondering if I could doodle a scene from this oneshot too? (: Drop me a message if you're interested- I'll leave my address again, sazzle1997@hotmail.co.uk
Keep on writing! :D
Sara xo