There's so much plot, I might have to read it again later. It's still unclear how all these events will lead to the "payback" part. It's a good thing I'll have lots to read still (4 more chapters or so), while bad at the same time, I can hardly wait for updates like this, dammit! (lol)
So many new characters entering your story, lots of chaotic events, one of the most riveting fanfiction I ever read. Impossible to tell what will happen next! Good job! And update as soon as you can!