I love break through chapters, this was one of them, Pete finally giving in and allowing her to help.
I especially enjoyed the diner seen, the ambiance was perfect. Then when he let her read the stuff he'd been writing, that was just perfect.
I'm also in love with the narrative aspect of the story and witty comments thrown in, it makes for a great read.
Thanks for updating - I'm been super nice today and it's monday morning. I should be telling everyone how much everyone and everything sucks. I'm so emo it's dispicable.
Author's response
I must say, I so enjoy your reviews. They are such an ego boost and you're specific about what you like. I'd hate to see what would happen if you didn't like a chapter.
And congrats on being nice...on a Monday morning, no less. If this was myspace, I'd definitely give you two kudos.