Review for Not Looking

Not Looking

(#) Tawney 2006-11-20

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Seriously no! I'm sat in the big computer lounge at uni and while i was reading this i kept muttering and at the end i practically shouted "NO!" aloud. The person next to me didnt look overly impressed.....

Beautiful writing at the end though, really captured the moment. There better be a massive rewind thing though! Just as their relationship was getting so sweet and fluffy, he wanted her to meet his friends and family! How can he die? Its just not right!

Okay calm....deep breaths....Update soon or i may turn into a crazy person.XX

Author's response

Ha! I love giving my readers head wrecks....