uh, brilliant. i'm not even kidding. i love Pete. he's more complicated in this story than i've ever seen in any other story, and that, my friend, takes skill.
way to fucking go. i love this i can't wait for more.
p.s. sprry i've reviewed so late in the game. i just got around to reading, by reccomendation , and i'm way impressed.
Author's response
That totally made my day, as sad as that sounds. Don't fret, he'll get plenty more complicated as the story progresses. Thanks for reviewing :)