Nice chapter. It all seems rather... average, but that works for me. I'm wondering what happened with this Jessica character.
If there's one piece of advice I could offer, try not to use the & mark unless it's part of a name or something... :D The word 'and' isn't that long to write :P
Anyway, yes, I liked this. Can't wait for the next one to be revised and all.
PS. I noticed in your bio on your profile page you mention you like Alice Nine. They used to be one of my favorite bands, I still like them somewhat but haven't listened in a while... And I love anime, too, though I tend to favor manga.
Author's response
Yeah that was one of the reasons why I'm revising the chapters.
I like both manga and anime. San Japan is coming up here in San Antonio in August. It's a huge anime/manga convention. I plan on taking my son for the first time. I plan on dressing him up as baby Yoda.