I like how you ended this story. While I am saddened that Harry died relatively young, his abuse from the Dursleys had consequences so his death at that age makes sense. Still, at least that last 40 plus years of his life were very happy ones.
This was a well written story overall and I very much enjoyed it. I also liked the final fates for Snape and Dumbledore.
Author's response
Hey MonCappy.
I’m handling both these reviews as one.
Alas, my sister passed on Sept 1, of 10. In many ways she was responsible for her own death, in that she didn’t talke care of herself. She allowed herself to become and remain morbidly obese and I believe that was the prime contributing factor.
I will miss her for as long as I live.
Harry: I wrote both outcomes, but in the end, I decided it was better to have hm meet the frce in the Jedi manner. On a personal note, I both lived this kind of abuse and due to my time in the military being a fearless idiot, I’ve had seventy three broken bones, at least four concussions, two torn rotator cuffs and more scars than I’d like to admit. I’m probably going to die before I hit seventy. On the other hand, I did a survey a few years ago, and with the exception of being an astronaut, I’ve done everything I wanted to do as a kid. (Did a lot of things I didn’t want to, too!)
Snape/Dumbledore: I couldn’t imagine more appropriate fates for either of them.
BWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAH!
Alorkin