Excellent story. I had a great time reading it. I was sad to see Luna die. I liked how you showed that Harry never forgot her, but buying the Quibbler when her father could no longer run it.
I liked the scene with the DE's appearing on the airplace wing. I KNEW that was going to happen. Great homage to "Make a Wish" there. Looking forward to reading your other "Harry goes back in time" story.