Review for Recollection

Recollection

(#) beatus_quinn 2013-04-30

I think this is really interesting. But for constructive criticism and stuff, I think maybe if you could expand a little upon like Gerard's mental instability, perhaps here or in future chapters, because I have a feeling it's a central part of the story, right?

Anyway, this was cool, I liked it.

Author's response

Thank you for the tips! Yes, I do plan to elaborate on that a bit more :D Thank you!!