Woah!...This story is very good. I laughed, I cried, I wanted to be made out with like that...lol. Even though I kinda like Patrick not as much as Pete it made me like him even more and I love ur character Olivia she was good. The only thing that kinda threw me off was the whole flashback thing. I liked the idea but i was completely confused when you did it first but then explained it...but it was still kewl. And I hope Patrick doesn't completely die...I actually screamed at my screen like O did when she saw his body (yea I know I'm a big nerd). Anyways I really like this story and I can't wait to see what else you do to it.