(#) KenF 2013-05-08
An interesting opening. While I generally hope for an intelligent story, delivering some ultraviolence to Dumbles would not be inapropos.
Author's response
Hello KenF.
I’m not that civilized. Dumbledore is the direct cause of so much pain and suffering, all in the name of the greater good. I figured he deserved a bop onna beak (or three.)
“I’ll try to keep this as intelligent as possible. The only Deus Ex Machina will be the trip back in time (which I intentionally did not go into as temporal mechanics is not my field) and Fawkes. Pretty much every thing else will be (reasonably) explained.
Alorkin