Ha ha. Why thank you for the reference. FG at the Disco. ;) Really, I think it´s beautiful that you have both Kales and Pete´s thoughts in here. It doesn´t disrupt the I-narration a bit. Gives the characters more depth which is really important because there´s not so much action as talking going on in here. Very good work, I really like it. :)
Author's response
Thank you for the amazing review. I'm glad that my crazy thought process isn't confusing anyone so far.