WHAT. NO. THIS IS NOT ACCEPTABLE. WHY WOULD YOU JUST - INTRODUCE SOME COOL KID AND THEN THINK IT WOULD BE A GOOD IDEA TO THROW HIM ONTO A STREET? AND A CLIFFHANGER? OH. OKAY THANKS.
(but seriously, tell me our main character doesn't have to watch a kid die and tell me they don't just let it haunt them if the kid does die, and omg no no. please help a guy out and don't screw me over with your story?)
-S
Author's response
well i take it you like it so far!
so uh, you don't hate me, I will say its not the end. I'm not that cruel :) thanks for feedback!