Wow. Wow. Wow.
My best friend is sitting beside me, I showed her this, and all she could say was "go back to primary school, stupid." And I agree. My 11-year-old brother can write better than you. My best friend's 10-year-old sister can write better than you. I COULD WRITE BETTER THAN YOU WHEN I WAS 4, FOR FUCK'S SAKE.
If you want to write, Tavros, then get a bloody dictionary, or actually take writing seriously.
Now, I'm off to go bury my face in lively, fluffy muppet buttock.
-Dave fucking Strider.
Author's response
fuk u im not fukin stupid if u dnt lyk my story den fyn but dont take it out on me.
y r u bein so meen 2 me? i have lurnin dificultees nd its nt my folt. i just wnt 2 rite. i hv sum rly difcult things goin on nd ritin is an escap. i dnt car hw bad i am. its jus nice to leev dis wurld for a wile.
fukin cunt.