Review for Feels like drowning

Feels like drowning

(#) FlyingSmoke 2013-05-15

kinky alien sex.
That is all.
(I liked it, and I'm liking this thing do far. I don't know if I've reviewed yet on other chapters but I like this one, how it mixes the innocent with the luuuuuv and the mistery [oh english...]. While yes, Bob and Jamia are screwed, I don't care, since they're whatever, trying to bring Frank back to the Colony or some shit like that. And then Gerard's epiphany... Oh my god, that man is crazy. After seeing Frank enjoying water, getting used to legs, and knowing a lot about mermaids you would think he would go 'oh, Frank must be a merman' but no. Aliens.
Thank you, Based Gerard.
Update soon, Ray :) )

Author's response

Haha yes Gerard is obviously not the smartest man in the world ;) But I'm sure he'll figure out that Frank isn't an alien soon enough XD
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for taking the time to review :D
xo