What I really like about this piece is the simplicity, yet the complexity of it. What you have created here is not only a story, but also a representation of something that is forever, and beautiful. I can practically feel the love and the emotion seeping through the seams of your tale, and I thought the wording you used was clever, as it represents the characters' multi-dimensional personalities in a way that leaves a lasting effect on the reader.
Author's response
You understand me, I hope to be an author one day, and of course this story has gotten me somewhere already