This was excellent, such a nice twist regarding Fawkes and I always like insight into the Veela.
It is a pity there will be others as it would be better with just Fawkes and Fleur, too many ladies tends to get too much.
Hermione involved was a disapointment as she always is it would have been a refeshing change to be without her and I never liked how nasty Hermione was to Fleur in the 6th book.
That said I hope there is more and I may never think of Fawkes the same way again.