I just found this story, and I love it. You manage to keep from having super!Harry casually pwn all. It's great that the various bad guys are smart and capable, too.
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Thanks Banner.
Good to see you aboard. I dislike ‘Super Harry!’ stories intensely, as I consider them to be wholly unrealistic. Flaws are what make a character interesting. The only thing that keeps this version of Harry from being ‘Mister Invincible’ is that while he has the power, he doesn’t flaunt it. He’ll have a few occasions where he’ll need it, but other than that, he’s keeping it under wraps.
Bad guys: I also detest the paperdoll bad guys Rowling gave us. That’s one of the reasons I think Books 6 & 7 were ghosted. The villains went from being ‘Dr. Evil’ to something actually resembling villains. I make my baddies able to defeat the good guys, and on occasion, they do.
Alorkin