REAL NICE! Yur an awesome writer! I reda so many of yur stories and their really really good!!! I think yur the best authour here! lol and jennieman. Well thats only caz i read most of yurs and jennieman's. I'm sure everyone else has totally great stories as well but i cant really yread everyone's.
U describe things real well. And the Thisbe and Jyas? is it Jyas? I dont remember, did u make em up? caz they sound real. If so, yur real good at that too lol. Update soon! Rates exciting.