You have a very good story and Even though I have read much HP fan fiction this is the very first time that I have seen this type of scenario in use. I can easily see the evil minion turning just the other way as Harry uses his authority of them as a mean to defeat Voldey. The English grammar is very good, the story well conceived and planned as to chapter content and best of all from this retired English teacher's view point it all hangs together logically. Wonderful. Clayva10