"With a ‘Snikt’ a blade flashed. The teen snarled. “I said give over, or I might just decide to cut up your little girlfriend’s pretty face!” Now, things had gone deadly serious. Dan prepared himself for battle."
Was that Dan supposed to be Mack?
Remus is a useless coward. Just like in canon.
I like how Dumbledore's plans are ruined here.
Harry is absurdly skilled, but it is justified here.
An enjoyable read.
Author's response
Hello erbkaiser.
Yes, it was. I can’t understand wehy I might have put that there, as I NEVER use Dan. My only possible excuse is that I was typing this until about ten minutes before I posted. OOPS!
Remus: I disagree. I see Remus as someone who’s been shat on for nearly his entire life, and unfortunatrely has reacted to that in the manner of a normal human being.
Dumbledore: Anytime I can screw with the old bastard, I take it.
Harry: Yes, he’s skilled, but he has had a thousand years to learn those skills.
Thanks for the kind words.
Alorkin