Review for The Lemon Games

The Lemon Games

(#) The_Quest_One 2013-07-04

Serously... What the fuck is up with all the hate for Sakura and why are all you fucks the only ones writing stories now. I'm so sick of this shit. If you're going to include bashing then refrain from even writing a story or just leave that character out completly. Is it that fucking hard to write a decent story at the expense of the canon heroine nontheless? And seriously, the only thing you fuckers focus on with Sakura is that beginning stage in Part 1. Fuck character development I guess because once a "howler monkey" or what the fuck ever, always a howler monkey. That's some fucked up logic, and using that for ANY and ALL chacters makes this and others like it a bad story. I'll say it again. If you can't write a decent story at the expense of other characters, DON'T FUCKING INCLUDE THEM OR SPREAD YOUR STUPIDITY AND HATE AROUND!

Author's response

Hmm, I guess I deserve this review a bit, though I sense a little too much animosity held at me for this. It was literally a one-time comment from back when I was in a bit of a angst mood for certain characters. As for spreading my stupidity, I would like to point out that what I wrote in this story isn't the worst out there. Will I include Sakura later on in the story? Perhaps, perhaps not. I'm still focused on Part 1. Thank you for your review anyways.