Damn it Sage! This story is just too addicting! How can you expect us to wait for two weeks?!? Lol
Very excellent chapter once again. Loved Sasuke getting what he deserves. Also liked having Sasuke's dark side consistently there. But then again we still dont know Sasuke's devious plan when "teaming" up with Naruto(canon).
I was surprised Naruto had a Hulk smash moment and missed attacking Sasuke. But then you revealed it was Kushina pissed off. That was a nice touch, and it just shows how effective you are in juggling characters.
Im surprised previous reviewers didn't recognize Sasuke used Izanagi. Looks like Sasuke is getting that EMS. Still dont like how that works and is obtained. Also loved that little history lesson about EMS. Damn it Sage you're just too much of a boss.
Great job of reconciling Ino and Naruto. Ditto with Kiyomi and Naruko. Looking forward to see what you'll do for Anko and Kiyomi.
Female Pain Path having the Rinnegan is a surprise. I am glad that she's not going to be a Bijuu's body. Wasnt expecting the Rinnegan though nice job.
I liked Konohamaru inclusion in the mission and Shika's words and gift to Naruto. You do a great job showing Naruto's relationships with his girls but since this is smut his male friends take a backseat. Yet you still bother to incorporate them in. It's probably why this chapter ended having more words.
Looks like TenTen, Yugito and Haku got their moments to shine. It's fun to see them kick butt. Plus Karin being competent in battle was another nice touch.
Interaction between Kurenai and Anko may not be canon but it just seems so right. It isn't original for those two to be buddies it's just they are meant to be that. I'm guessing it'll take awhile for her to join the harem if she ever joins but Mikoto doesn't seem too far.
Looking forward to what you're planning for Shukaku
Finally, loved Konan telling her story to Konoha. Great idea by Naruto to tell her to do that. I'm wondering how you'll change her fight with Obito. But I doubt she dies this time.
If it wasn't obvious, I loved the chapter. Great job sir!
PS I kinda made a mistake. I'm more of a cooler person. Besides you'll probably notice some differences in articulacy and amount of typos.